FIVE 17-SYLLABLE SEE-IT POEMS
1
Left or right? 
Bright star or empty palm? 
Behind your back a change of hands.
2
Thomas wasn’t there to see it.
He needed proof.
Then faith gave new eyes. 
3
What the blind man sees
with wisdom, those with sight
cannot identify.
4
In placid waters
your reflection stares back at you.
Which face is true?
5
The child sees a herd of stallions
stampede across the sky.
We see only jumbled clouds. 
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These are wonderful, Sal! I do, however take exception to number 5. I see the stallions.
ReplyDeleteI'm very taken with number 1!
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